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cdplayar
Posts : 1468
UT points : 7919
Join date : 2009-08-10
Age : 27
Location : Ontario, Canada!
| | Subject: Just Alive ;; <3 Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:18 am | |
| This Is A Poem I Wrote Last Night
I Felt Very Upset Last Night.
Just Alive
Im Just Alive
Nothing Else
The Emptiness Inside
Is Like A Knife In The Back.
Every Dove Flies Away
This Is One That Can’t
It’s Wings, They Sway,
They Sway In The Wind,
Only The Emptiness Assures It,
That It Will Never Fly.
This Dove, It Won’t Ge High
It’s Just Another Being,
Its Just Alive. | |
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beast
Posts : 392
UT points : 7215
Join date : 2009-05-04
Age : 27
Location : U.S.
| | Subject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3 Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:08 pm | |
| Your too hard on yourself...  You take after me and that's a bad thing... | |
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Evil
Posts : 1177
UT points : 7632
Join date : 2009-08-13
| | Subject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3 Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:23 pm | |
| Thats a nice poem  Poems are a good way to express yourselves. | |
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cdplayar
Posts : 1468
UT points : 7919
Join date : 2009-08-10
Age : 27
Location : Ontario, Canada!
| | Subject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3 Fri Nov 13, 2009 3:10 pm | |
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pikachu!
Posts : 354
UT points : 7260
Join date : 2009-08-11
Age : 30
Location : *Runs away*
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Eresir
Posts : 126
UT points : 6025
Join date : 2009-06-11
Age : 29
Location : The world of dreams.
| | Subject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3 Sat Nov 14, 2009 12:04 am | |
| - pikachu! wrote:
- I love your peom, but the fact that you wrote it because you were sad, makes me sad...
 The fact that you wrote in purple makes me sad. I like your poem, it suits your Kairi avatar | |
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pikachu!
Posts : 354
UT points : 7260
Join date : 2009-08-11
Age : 30
Location : *Runs away*
| | Subject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3 Sat Nov 14, 2009 6:47 am | |
| whats wrong with purple?
I started to write in the color of my status, is that so bad?
veteran=purple. | |
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SoulSilverHeartGold
Posts : 2486
UT points : 7091
Join date : 2009-08-12
Age : 26
Location : Canada
| | Subject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3 Sat Nov 14, 2009 10:59 am | |
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cdplayar
Posts : 1468
UT points : 7919
Join date : 2009-08-10
Age : 27
Location : Ontario, Canada!
| | Subject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3 Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:34 pm | |
| - Eresir wrote:
- pikachu! wrote:
- I love your peom, but the fact that you wrote it because you were sad, makes me sad...
The fact that you wrote in purple makes me sad.
I like your poem, it suits your Kairi avatar Thanks
(And Thanks Pikachu! Aswell. [=)
@SSHG
Thanks..? | |
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