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PostSubject: Thinking about writing a novel   Sun Oct 04, 2009 10:53 pm

heres part of it plz no spelling and grammer nazis

"YAAA!" Roy yelled as he swung his sword at his enemy. His foe was a large man who weilded his blade with ease. Through the long blue hair that covered his eyes he saw Roy's attack and quickly parried the blow. This process constantly repeted untill both men could barely weild their weapons. Again Roy made his move this time his foe avoided the attack and swung his own blade. Roy could hear the wind being sliced by his enemy and closed his eyes and prepared for the bone-shattering blow he was about to receive.
"Roy! There you are!" Both warriers stopped and turned toword the distant voice. There on top of the hill was a lone boy. He was short and scrawny with pale skin and hair as green as the tops of the trees. He started to run toword the two exhausted men. Roy realized that his foe was distracted and made his move. His foe being a battle-trained soldier saw the young man and in an instant ducked and bumped him in the gut with the handel of his sword.
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PostSubject: Re: Thinking about writing a novel   Sat Dec 12, 2009 9:42 am

song0flife wrote:
heres part of it plz no spelling and grammer nazis

"YAAA!" Roy yelled as he swung his sword at his enemy. His foe was a large man who weilded his blade with ease. Through the long blue hair that covered his eyes he saw Roy's attack and quickly parried the blow. This process constantly repeted untill both men could barely weild their weapons. Again Roy made his move this time his foe avoided the attack and swung his own blade. Roy could hear the wind being sliced by his enemy and closed his eyes and prepared for the bone-shattering blow he was about to receive.
"Roy! There you are!" Both warriers stopped and turned toword the distant voice. There on top of the hill was a lone boy. He was short and scrawny with pale skin and hair as green as the tops of the trees. He started to run toword the two exhausted men. Roy realized that his foe was distracted and made his move. His foe being a battle-trained soldier saw the young man and in an instant ducked and bumped him in the gut with the handel of his sword.
Why is this like Roy vs. Ike?
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