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PostSubject: Just Alive ;; <3   Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:18 am

This Is A Poem I Wrote Last Night
I Felt Very Upset Last Night.

Just Alive

Im Just Alive
Nothing Else
The Emptiness Inside
Is Like A Knife In The Back.
Every Dove Flies Away
This Is One That Can’t
It’s Wings, They Sway,
They Sway In The Wind,
Only The Emptiness Assures It,
That It Will Never Fly.
This Dove, It Won’t Ge High
It’s Just Another Being,
Its Just Alive.
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PostSubject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3   Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:08 pm

Your too hard on yourself... Sad
You take after me and that's a bad thing... Sad
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PostSubject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3   Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:23 pm

Thats a nice poem Smile

Poems are a good way to express yourselves.
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PostSubject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3   Fri Nov 13, 2009 3:10 pm

beast wrote:
Your too hard on yourself... Sad
You take after me and that's a bad thing... Sad
But Your AWESOME!
So Like,
Thats A Good Thing. Smile

Evil wrote:
Thats a nice poem Smile

Poems are a good way to express yourselves.

Thanks Man. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3   Fri Nov 13, 2009 6:56 pm

I love your peom, but the fact that you wrote it because you were sad, makes me sad...
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PostSubject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3   Sat Nov 14, 2009 12:04 am

pikachu! wrote:
I love your peom, but the fact that you wrote it because you were sad, makes me sad...

The fact that you wrote in purple makes me sad.

I like your poem, it suits your Kairi avatar
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PostSubject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3   Sat Nov 14, 2009 6:47 am

whats wrong with purple?
I started to write in the color of my status, is that so bad?
veteran=purple.
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PostSubject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3   Sat Nov 14, 2009 10:59 am

very... poetic
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PostSubject: Re: Just Alive ;; <3   Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:34 pm

Eresir wrote:
pikachu! wrote:
I love your peom, but the fact that you wrote it because you were sad, makes me sad...
The fact that you wrote in purple makes me sad.

I like your poem, it suits your Kairi avatar

Thanks
(And Thanks Pikachu! Aswell. [=)

@SSHG
Thanks..?
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