Why is suicune cut off?
Well it doesnt seem to have that good color flow... I guess..
And for the c4d for the background, you couldnt find a way to cut out the black part? Remember c4ds are NOT mostly used for backgrounds, but for effects.
Now the text is kinda matching, but its ok.
Its an overall what an average person starting out would do. So I would rate it like most of the people in this forum would.
7/10.
Sorry for being the party killer.
but feedback is what helps you improve.
EDIT: blarg? is that a background c4d?