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LucarioLady
Posts : 290 UT points : 5979 Join date : 2009-06-20 Age : 28 Location : lol Land! (In other words, Australia)
| Subject: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:27 pm | |
| So what do you guys think of my sprites? Fire Feraligatr Dark Flareon Flaaffeon Luxdash Hope you guys like em! You guys wanna share yours?
Last edited by LucarioLady on Sun Nov 22, 2009 10:54 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Just fixing it up.) | |
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beast
Posts : 392 UT points : 7418 Join date : 2009-05-04 Age : 28 Location : U.S.
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:32 pm | |
| The colors are great! But the attempt to sprite isn't very creative or good... Needs some work... Overall Color 9.5 Splice 2.1 Score 5.3 low | |
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LucarioLady
Posts : 290 UT points : 5979 Join date : 2009-06-20 Age : 28 Location : lol Land! (In other words, Australia)
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beast
Posts : 392 UT points : 7418 Join date : 2009-05-04 Age : 28 Location : U.S.
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:46 pm | |
| [/quote] yeah, I know. I just need practice. You know what they "Practice makes perfect !". [/quote] But if no one is perfect how can practice make you perfect? | |
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Stickguy41
Posts : 291 UT points : 5689 Join date : 2009-10-30
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:56 pm | |
| Like Beast said, the coloring is great but there isn't much splicing and it is barely noticable. But other than that, you did great! Really like Flaaffeon. | |
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LucarioLady
Posts : 290 UT points : 5979 Join date : 2009-06-20 Age : 28 Location : lol Land! (In other words, Australia)
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Nov 21, 2009 9:31 pm | |
| - beast wrote:
yeah, I know. I just need practice. You know what they "Practice makes perfect !". [/quote] But if no one is perfect how can practice make you perfect?[/quote] Well close to perfect. | |
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LucarioLady
Posts : 290 UT points : 5979 Join date : 2009-06-20 Age : 28 Location : lol Land! (In other words, Australia)
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Nov 21, 2009 9:35 pm | |
| I made another 1. Hope you guys like it. Arcegioh | |
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Stickguy41
Posts : 291 UT points : 5689 Join date : 2009-10-30
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Nov 21, 2009 10:05 pm | |
| - LucarioLady wrote:
- I made another 1. Hope you guys like it.
Arcegioh I really like this one! The Lugia head doesn't really fit, though. | |
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LucarioLady
Posts : 290 UT points : 5979 Join date : 2009-06-20 Age : 28 Location : lol Land! (In other words, Australia)
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Nov 21, 2009 10:14 pm | |
| - Stickguy41 wrote:
- LucarioLady wrote:
- I made another 1. Hope you guys like it.
Arcegioh I really like this one! The Lugia head doesn't really fit, though. Yeah guess ur right. I should've kept the lugia neck on. | |
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beast
Posts : 392 UT points : 7418 Join date : 2009-05-04 Age : 28 Location : U.S.
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sun Nov 22, 2009 7:13 am | |
| I like the colors and the splice between Arceus and and Ho-Oh...(lugia head doesn't fit in) But it seems that you rushed through attaching the wing on the outside.... | |
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LucarioLady
Posts : 290 UT points : 5979 Join date : 2009-06-20 Age : 28 Location : lol Land! (In other words, Australia)
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Mon Nov 23, 2009 11:24 pm | |
| Got 3 more. Twiluar Flying Weavile Espeon Princess Hope you like these ones too. | |
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beast
Posts : 392 UT points : 7418 Join date : 2009-05-04 Age : 28 Location : U.S.
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:11 am | |
| Not bad they're getting better. Try saving them as PNG! though for better quality. | |
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Kanrik Admin
Posts : 1486 UT points : 14731 Join date : 2009-05-07 Age : 33 Location : The Distortion World, its beautiful this time of year
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Tue Nov 24, 2009 9:02 pm | |
| Advise: I'm just going to guess that your relatively new to the splicing area of sprites, so I'm going to try to point a few things out, to help with the realism.
For Example, your "Flying Weavile" doesn't have the unity it needs. For starters, the left wing would not be behind the tail, unless it were attached to the tail. Thats pretty much the basic gist for that one, besides that the colors aren't the greatest, it makes it a bit hard to see some of the detail a sprite needs.
As for the Espeon Princess, it needs unity. For instance, would the arm's "skin" color be different from the heads? Also, the neck is so far off that it looks like its on the shoulder.
Arcegioh on the other hand, its all in the proportion and the angle the sprite is facing, the back wing makes it look twisted, which takes alot away from the effect. Also, theres not really much wrong with using Lugia's Head, but it has to look like it belongs on the body.
You just need to work on the synergy of the sprite.
also, Beast is right, .PNG saves the quality | |
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LucarioLady
Posts : 290 UT points : 5979 Join date : 2009-06-20 Age : 28 Location : lol Land! (In other words, Australia)
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Tue Nov 24, 2009 9:59 pm | |
| - Pk Trainer Kanrik wrote:
- Advise:
I'm just going to guess that your relatively new to the splicing area of sprites, so I'm going to try to point a few things out, to help with the realism.
For Example, your "Flying Weavile" doesn't have the unity it needs. For starters, the left wing would not be behind the tail, unless it were attached to the tail. Thats pretty much the basic gist for that one, besides that the colors aren't the greatest, it makes it a bit hard to see some of the detail a sprite needs.
As for the Espeon Princess, it needs unity. For instance, would the arm's "skin" color be different from the heads? Also, the neck is so far off that it looks like its on the shoulder.
Arcegioh on the other hand, its all in the proportion and the angle the sprite is facing, the back wing makes it look twisted, which takes alot away from the effect. Also, theres not really much wrong with using Lugia's Head, but it has to look like it belongs on the body.
You just need to work on the synergy of the sprite.
also, Beast is right, .PNG saves the quality Thanks for the tips. | |
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Evil
Posts : 1177 UT points : 7835 Join date : 2009-08-13
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Thu Nov 26, 2009 12:18 am | |
| - LucarioLady wrote:
- So what do you guys think of my sprites?
Fire Feraligatr
Dark Flareon
Flaaffeon
Luxdash
Hope you guys like em! You guys wanna share yours? These, are nice, but some of them need MOAR color changing, thats why some splice parts look out of place. The colors are very nice, just try not to darken the shadows too much, and have a really bright color (like form rapidash), other wise it'd look weird in my opinion. Also, try to be creative with the names, and stuff, I don't think luxdash would make it to a pokemon game. tl;dr: Make it look natural. | |
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LucarioLady
Posts : 290 UT points : 5979 Join date : 2009-06-20 Age : 28 Location : lol Land! (In other words, Australia)
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:28 am | |
| Well here's another one with an Arceus body. But I'm not quite sure to call em... I know some of the feet are kinda outta place, but I was tired when I was making it. | |
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cdplayar
Posts : 1468 UT points : 8122 Join date : 2009-08-10 Age : 28 Location : Ontario, Canada!
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:50 am | |
| That Last One I Think Is My Fav Sprite Of All Time. ;D | |
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beast
Posts : 392 UT points : 7418 Join date : 2009-05-04 Age : 28 Location : U.S.
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Fri Dec 04, 2009 2:07 pm | |
| - LucarioLady wrote:
- Well here's another one with an Arceus body.
But I'm not quite sure to call em... I know some of the feet are kinda outta place, but I was tired when I was making it. The leg in the front doesn't look attached very well. | |
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LucarioLady
Posts : 290 UT points : 5979 Join date : 2009-06-20 Age : 28 Location : lol Land! (In other words, Australia)
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:47 am | |
| - beast wrote:
- LucarioLady wrote:
- Well here's another one with an Arceus body.
But I'm not quite sure to call em... I know some of the feet are kinda outta place, but I was tired when I was making it. The leg in the front doesn't look attached very well. Maybe you should re-read what I said before in the quote... | |
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beast
Posts : 392 UT points : 7418 Join date : 2009-05-04 Age : 28 Location : U.S.
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Dec 05, 2009 7:15 am | |
| - LucarioLady wrote:
- beast wrote:
- LucarioLady wrote:
- Well here's another one with an Arceus body.
But I'm not quite sure to call em... I know some of the feet are kinda outta place, but I was tired when I was making it. The leg in the front doesn't look attached very well. Maybe you should re-read what I said before in the quote... I saw...But other than that it's good...Your best so far. | |
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GaiaAero Junior Moderator
Posts : 466 UT points : 6577 Join date : 2009-06-09 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Dec 05, 2009 9:58 am | |
| - beast wrote:
- LucarioLady wrote:
- beast wrote:
- LucarioLady wrote:
- Well here's another one with an Arceus body.
But I'm not quite sure to call em... I know some of the feet are kinda outta place, but I was tired when I was making it. The leg in the front doesn't look attached very well. Maybe you should re-read what I said before in the quote... I saw...But other than that it's good...Your best so far. If you read it, then theres no need to comment on it | |
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Kanrik Admin
Posts : 1486 UT points : 14731 Join date : 2009-05-07 Age : 33 Location : The Distortion World, its beautiful this time of year
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Sat Dec 05, 2009 10:14 am | |
| - LucarioLady wrote:
- Well here's another one with an Arceus body.
But I'm not quite sure to call em... I know some of the feet are kinda outta place, but I was tired when I was making it. you mentioned the first thing that picked out at me, so no comment there. The tail looks a bit too thin though, compaired to the rest of the body, it kinda seems more like the body itself should be smaller... that and it look like it belongs on a rat to me, but thats just me. | |
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LucarioLady
Posts : 290 UT points : 5979 Join date : 2009-06-20 Age : 28 Location : lol Land! (In other words, Australia)
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:08 am | |
| Well, here's two more. Phantom Lucario Gaitsu I wasn't meant to do much splicing. | |
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LucasFTW
Posts : 350 UT points : 6208 Join date : 2009-05-25 Age : 27 Location : I am where i'm needed, helping eat cookies.
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cdplayar
Posts : 1468 UT points : 8122 Join date : 2009-08-10 Age : 28 Location : Ontario, Canada!
| Subject: Re: What do you think of my sprites ? Wed Feb 03, 2010 6:11 am | |
| They're Better Than I could Do :3
Just Practise Splicing Moar, And You're Good (Y) | |
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