shoddy team

Subject: shoddy team Thu May 20, 2010 2:24 pm

MY NEW SHODDYBATTLE TEAM

this is obious for singles only

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umbreon @ leftovers
Carefull ( Sp. Def + Sp. Atk -)
252 HP / 252 Sp. Def. / 6 Atk
Sycronize

Curse
Beton pass
Payback
Moonlight

This is my lead to set-up a few curses an then to beton pass it to one of my sweepers moonlight if i need to boost my HP back up andpayback for a stab and so i won't get walled by taunt

shoddy team Miltank

Miltank @ Choise Band
Adamant (Atk + Sp Atk -)
252 Atk / 252 Hp / 6 Def
scrappy

Return
Zen Headbutt
TunderPunch
Earthquake

My awsome Banded milktank is usaly beton pass to this pokémon its atacks are devestating!

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floatzel [/img]@ life orb
Jolly (Atk+ Sp. Atk -)
252 Atk / 252 Spe /6 Hp
Swift Swim

aqua jet
ice punch / persuit / crunch
waterfall
Brick break / crunch / persuit

[b]This is my physical sweeper i know that curse decreases speed but i still picked jolly nature incease i can't set-up a curse if i can in combination with aqua jet wil mosly OHKO a pokémon

ok these pokémon are certain now the other 3 i'm still tghinking of changing

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Grovyle @ life orb
Tmid (Sp + Atk -)
252 Spe / 252 Sp Atk / 6 Hp
Overgrow

Dragonbreath
Energyball / leach seed
Hidden Power - Fire
Leaf storm

This is my special sweeper same as floatsel i chose a speed + nature

shoddy team Primeape

Primeape @ choise scarf
Adamant (Atk + Sp. Atk -)
252 Atk / 252 Spe / 6 HP
Vital spirit

Close combat
Earthquake
Fire puch
Tunderpuch

this is team member ist for the curse strategie just a physical sweeper

shoddy team Raichu

Raichu @ focus sash
Modest (Sp. Atk + Atk -)
252 Sp. Atk / 252 Spe / 6 Hp
static

Tunderbolt / tunder
Singal Beam
Hidden Power - Ice
Grass knot

again not for the curse strategie just a special sweeper this will most likly stay

ok now for the last 3 i have some changes in mind cause i don't have walls at al im made these

ok so i needed somone who can counter fighting types in order to protect my umbreon

so i came up with SlowKing

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Slowking @ leftovers
Bolt ( Def + Atk -)
252 Hp / 252 Def / 6 Sp. Attack

Rain Dance / trickroom
Physic / Surf
Trickroom / toxic
Toxic / Tunder Wave / surf /

Raindace fo setting up for raichu i probally change his tunderbolt into tunder pphysic to kill some fragile fighting types
trickroom is for the curse strategie cause it decreases speed and milktank is a little to slow so i can outspeed alot of pokémon and do alot of dammage to my opponent team

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Regice @ leftovers
Calm (+ Sp Def. - Atk)
252 Sp. Def / 252 Hp / 6 Sp. Atk
Clear body

T-Wave / Rain dance
Tunder / ice beam
Ice beam
Toxic

this is just my special wall rain dance for the same reason as slowking also (mayby ad a Tinder on him ?)

I NEED HELP WITH THE EV's !! Very Happy

Subject: Re: shoddy team Thu May 20, 2010 3:01 pm

Just because Uutton uses Grovyle it doesnt mean you also must, yours is literally a copy of his, except for LO>Choice Specs. Sceptile does everything Grovyle does WAY better, has better SpA and Speed. Also, your team will get massively murdered by SD Lucario, DD Mence, DD Dos once Primeape is gone, Scizor(duh) and, to a much lesser extent, Offensive Cune. Your Umbreon lead is awful, literally every common lead beats it, except for maybe Azelf. Swampert uses SR and Roars you, Mamoswine sets SR and Endeavor/Ice shard you if you attack him, Aerodactyl just taunts you, Metagross sets up SR and goes boom, Machamp just dynamic punches you. And before you say this are all OU...so is Umbreon, and thus your team cant battle in anything but OU/UBER

Subject: Re: shoddy team Thu May 20, 2010 4:23 pm

L wrote:: Just because Uutton uses Grovyle it doesnt mean you also must, yours is literally a copy of his, except for LO>Choice Specs. Sceptile does everything Grovyle does WAY better, has better SpA and Speed. Also, your team will get massively murdered by SD Lucario, DD Mence, DD Dos once Primeape is gone, Scizor(duh) and, to a much lesser extent, Offensive Cune. Your Umbreon lead is awful, literally every common lead beats it, except for maybe Azelf. Swampert uses SR and Roars you, Mamoswine sets SR and Endeavor/Ice shard you if you attack him, Aerodactyl just taunts you, Metagross sets up SR and goes boom, Machamp just dynamic punches you. And before you say this are all OU...so is Umbreon, and thus your team cant battle in anything but OU/UBER

yeah i thought that about the grovyle but im going to drop it
for the record UUton isn't any idol for me i just like grovyle thats all

and i already tested this team and this is shoddy 80 % of teh players don't know what there doing my umbreon does fine

yes i know umbrion is OU i whanted to try an umbreon cause it was changed to OU thats why i mad this team in the first place

why can't i only play in OU/uber ????
shoddy battle is rondom most are mixed tiers or OU

and before you go all like you love OU you are a noob if you know me i almost only play in NU

and help me improve my team instead of offending me

Subject: Re: shoddy team Thu May 20, 2010 4:32 pm

He wasn't offending you, he was actually being nice, your team is crap ._.

Umbreon Lead fails. EVERY lead owns it (even though L said azelf doesn't, it does.) Roserade can just put it to sleep and set up toxic spikes and go into a counter, yeah, there are good people on shoddy, i think youre part of the 80% (which is actually only about 40%), and no, only like 5% of people on the OU ladder play mixed, me being one of them, but my team actually kills comon threats Neutral

Listen to L, he is a lot better at battling than anyone on this forum imo. Don't call him a noob he'd most likely 6-0 you without trying if you were to use this team.

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since umbren is ou, u have 2 play ou, so id just change ot
and l is giving u advice
dont use umbreon, and in allhonesty, this team will get murdered in ou
ur playing n00bs if people dont know what to do to umbreon
it sux in ou
scizor, the #1 poke, owns it, lucario sets up on it, overall it just sux
i suggest just getting a new team, or changing umbreon so u can use it in lower tiers
b/c if u use it in ou u will get 6-0ed in no time flat

Subject: Re: shoddy team Thu May 20, 2010 4:39 pm

ok we already know this team sux can anyone help me improe it
i win 80 % of the times i play with this team (so yeah alot of noobs)
i don't have to play OU just mixed tiers will do

Subject: Re: shoddy team Thu May 20, 2010 6:55 pm

You want me to be rude? Dude, I was being soft when I told you all of your team flaws. Tell me, what do you have to take a Stabbed U-turn coming from a 591 attack? What do you have to take a 180 BP move coming from that same huge attack? What do you have to take a STABed 140 BP move from a 350 SpA? What do you have to kill Curselax when Primeape is gone? Your team lacks synergy, lacks strategy, lacks though on the team-building and lacks a real focus, the explanations are brief and state the obvious, the "mixed" tier metagame doesnt exist, you use 1 OU, your team is OU, and your team simply cant hold its ground in a metagame where pretty much ANY sweeper destroys it

Subject: Re: shoddy team Thu May 20, 2010 9:30 pm

get rid of umbreon and use someting like persian as a lead. Otherwise you can't ladder and i don't know how your winning 80% of your battles with this i think your UU team is much better.

Subject: Re: shoddy team Fri May 21, 2010 10:38 am

ok ok i know this team is a fail but it was an expiriment