RM OU Team

Will be continued later
Azelf @Focus Sash N Bravesquid Nature: Niave
Trait: Levitate
Evs: 252Spe 252SpA 4A
Movesets
Taunt
SR
Psychic
Explosion

Standard Smogon Azelf
Taunt a lead then set up SR Psychic for STAB Explosion for Massive damage

Scizor @Choice Band N Red Ark
Nature: Adamant
Trait: Technitian
EVs: 248HP 252Atk 8Spe
Movesets
Pursuit
BP
U turn
Superpower
Standard CB Scizor

Swampert @Lefties N Expert
Nature: Relaxed
Trait: [censored (illegal)] If it doesn't show you get the ability since he only has one
Evs: 252HP 252Def 4Atk
Movesets
Rest
Roar
Ice Beam
EQ

A great wall though this is a mixpert lead Rest for recovery Roar for Phazer specialties Ice Beam For Coverage EQ STAB

Heatran @Choice Scarf N Evilbomb
Nature: Modest
Trait: Flash Fire
EVs: 252Spe 252SpA 4Hp
Movesets
Dark Pulse
Earth Power
Dragon Pulse
Magma Storm

My Self Made Heatran Dark Pulse Earth Power and Dragon Pulse For Coverage
Magma Storm For STAB Magma Storm over Fire Blast Cause Its unperedictable I guess and It helps Ko a poke even if it has a sash

Togekiss @Lefties N TGKSARCH64
Nature: Calm
Trait: Serene Grace
EVs: 252HP 252SpD 4Def
Movesets
Roost
T wave
Air Slash
Grass Knot

Standard Paraflinching Togekiss T wave and Air Slash for Paraflinching Roost for healing Grass note for Bulky Waters

Tentacruel @Lefties N Eviljello:D
Nature: Calm
Trait: Liquid Ooze
EVs: 252HP 120Def 136SpD
Movesets
Toxic Spikes
Rapid Spin
HP Electric
Surf

Toxic Spikes Tentacruel
Toxic Spikes Self Explanitory Rapid Spin to get rid of entry hazards HP electric for coverage Surf for STAB

Theres my OU team Rate Comment Critiziez BYE

Ok my Stradegy if you call it or OU hitters or Something Going by Pokedex don't judge me

Machamp Could be countered by Swampert thanx to its Defences and could possibly work to KOing it with a Stab EQ

Tentacruel Swampert Again He can come in a STAB Surf and HP Electric and again STAB EQ

Gengar Scizor can be a good counter depending on if I predict right and If he get hit by HP fire if Azelf is still in he could hit him with STAB Psychic

Starmie again Scizor if I predict if its gonna switch Pursuit if not U turn

Gyarados Tentacruel can come in on a STAB water fall and Hit it with HP electric

Vaporeon Togekiss can T Wave it then Air Slash it to death scince Vapy isn't that heavy

Jolteon Heatran can come in and Earth Power him but if that fails I'm screwed great a flaw

Aerodactyl I think Azelf's speed beats its Speed by 1 so Taunt it first SR then I could switch ti Scizor cause most Aerodactyl have Rock Ground Combo and BP it

Snorlax Scizor can Superpower it but Snorlax could do what it does best Sleep again so I probobly bring Togekiss to air Slash and Grass knot it

Zapdos Swampert can come in on all Zapys attacks and Ice Beam him

Dragonite Swampert again could handle him with SR support and Ice Beam or Dragon Pulse from Heatran

Forretress This things why I will try and keep Azelf in to SR again Heatran can take em out

Scizor I hear Heatran is the best counter for these things

Heracross if it ain't Scarfed Heatran even if it is I pridict CC Togekiss and either it'll stay in for Air Slash or leave giving me a free Roost if SE Heatran with M Storm

Skarmory Heatrans Magma Storm Kos Skarm

Kingdra I may have problems yes Heatrans DP could KO kindra with SR Support but still if heatran goes down possibly Togekiss

Smeargle CB Technician STAB BP FTW if that fails Heatran's M Storm

Blissey Scizor's Superpower BP Ect

Suicune Togekiss and its bulk can come in T Wave it then Grass Knot

T Tar Scizors BP

Celebi Heatran could KO it with M Storm Scizor U Turn can badly damage it Togekiss and its T Wave Air Slash Combo

Swampert Grass Knot from Togekiss

Breloom Togekiss's Air Slash once It switches in or Heatran's M Storm If Heatran comes out from a KO

Ninjask Azelf's Taunt screws him over

Flygon Swamperts Ice Beam Heatrans D Pulse

S Mence Heatran and Swampert again

Metagross Heatrans M Storm Swapert's EQ if Metagross ain't carrying a Grass knot

Latias DP from Heatran U Turn from Scizor

Jarachi EQ from Swampert Heatran can also can come in and Char it

I

I'm a going to ask that you go through and re-format your team such that is a bit clearer to read. You have spacing and line-break issues that are forcing me to re-read this many times.

Further, What are your goals for the team? How do you plan to achieve them? Why did you pick these 6 pokemon to accomplish said goal?

I need to understand this to give you an effective team rate.

I've formated the team before like this many times and there was no problem everyone still rated them

Then allow me to be the first. There are ways of posting a team where the formatting is done for you. If you choose not to go by those, then you should, at least, work the spacing and line breaks out.

I don't understand what is going on with your swampert, either.

And none of this relieves the issue of purpose. Why you built the team and what things are supposed to accomplished help me give you an accurate rate.

I'm afraid neutral is righ leaf, this is too linear making it very hard to read. At the very least space out section headings and the content of said section with colons or semi-colons.

I just took a wild guess and assumed thats what you ment Seriosly I posted like this Before and I wasn't called on it

How hard is it to reformat it? Just Backspace out a whole bunch of enters. Then I'll rate it. And what is the purpose of the team? Quickstall, Stall, Mixed, Sweep, Stat Up, Baton Pass Chain, Surprise....etc. etc. etc. (not that all of these are even possible answers for the team.

Err does Standard count

You might as well give tentacruel something to cover it's weaknesses since It probably won't be going in against a bulky water anyway. Get something other than Ice Beam on Swampert since most Ice Types are going to outspeed it and one shot it anyways and Ice Beam probably won't even One Shot them. Other than that it looks good except that it has smogon written all over it so it is semi predictable.

Blumey wrote:

You might as well give tentacruel something to cover it's weaknesses since It probably won't be going in against a bulky water anyway. Get something other than Ice Beam on Swampert since most Ice Types are going to outspeed it and one shot it anyways and Ice Beam probably won't even One Shot them. Other than that it looks good except that it has smogon written all over it so it is semi predictable.

what are u talking about?
ice beam is for dragons not ice types
and i would definitely keep it, since other wise pokes like mence can set up on u