my semi stall team

i made an ou team but i feel it could use some work, any suggestions??

Lead:Metagross@Occa berry
Clear Body
Adament
248 HP / 232 Atk / 28 Spe
move set:
Bullet Punch,
Stealth Rock,
Explosion,
Earthquake


2nd:Vaporeon@Leftovers
Water absorb
Bold
188 HP / 252 Def / 68 Spe
move set:
Surf,
protect,
wish,
toxic


3rd:Skarmory@Leftovers
Keen eye
Impish
252 HP / 64 Atk / 176 Def / 16 Spe
move set:
Spikes,
Roost,
Drill Peck,
Whirlwind


4th: Rotom-H@Leftovers
Levetate
Bold
252 HP / 168 Def / 88 Spe
Move set:
Thunderbolt,
Shadow Ball,
Overheat,
Will-o-wisp


5th: Dugtrio@Choice Scarf
Arena trap
Adament
4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Move set:
Earthquake,
Night Slash,
Arial Ace,
Stone Edge

6th: Tyranitar@Leftovers
Sand Stream
Careful
252 HP / 40 Def / 216 SpD
Move Set:
Curse,
Rest,
Sleep Talk,
Payback


As you can see i run semi-stall, but if skarm dies early im done.

quite an evil stall team I must say.

Momo use the proper format....

Pialga93 wrote:

quite an evil stall team I must say.

Thx

SoulSilverHeartGold wrote:

Momo use the proper format....

I am

Frosslass@Focus Sash
Snow cloak
EVs: 252 Spe / 252 SpAtk / 4 Def
Timid (+Spe -Atk)
~Ice Beam
~Spikes
~Destiny Bond
~Taunt

SoulSilverHeartGold wrote:

Frosslass@Focus Sash
Snow cloak
EVs: 252 Spe / 252 SpAtk / 4 Def
Timid (+Spe -Atk)
~Ice Beam
~Spikes
~Destiny Bond
~Taunt

whatever it is in the wrong order big deal

Momo wrote:

SoulSilverHeartGold wrote:

Frosslass@Focus Sash
Snow cloak
EVs: 252 Spe / 252 SpAtk / 4 Def
Timid (+Spe -Atk)
~Ice Beam
~Spikes
~Destiny Bond
~Taunt

whatever it is in the wrong order big deal

No, it is not only that but this team shows that you are lazy, not being able to spell out Stealth Rock and saying S Rock instead is just annoying. Not to mention the fact that you don't explain any of your Pokémon's move sets, EVs, or even why you chose that Pokémon.

And, as SSHG said, please, please, please stick to the proper format... The way you have your team laid out right now is just horrible and hurts my eyes to read it.

And, I don't know why in the world your Choice Scarf Dugtrio (the worst item choice, too by the way) is Jolly... Seriously does 372 Speed need a +1 Speed Boost? Go with Adamant.

Shnoogle wrote:

Momo wrote:

SoulSilverHeartGold wrote:

Frosslass@Focus Sash
Snow cloak
EVs: 252 Spe / 252 SpAtk / 4 Def
Timid (+Spe -Atk)
~Ice Beam
~Spikes
~Destiny Bond
~Taunt

whatever it is in the wrong order big deal

No, it is not only that but this team shows that you are lazy, not being able to spell out Stealth Rock and saying S Rock instead is just annoying. Not to mention the fact that you don't explain any of your Pokémon's move sets, EVs, or even why you chose that Pokémon.

And, as SSHG said, please, please, please stick to the proper format... The way you have your team laid out right now is just horrible and hurts my eyes to read it.

And, I don't know why in the world your Choice Scarf Dugtrio (the worst item choice, too by the way) is Jolly... Seriously does 372 Speed need a +1 Speed Boost? Go with Adamant.

oops i meant adament

[quote="Momo"]

Shnoogle wrote:

Momo wrote:

SoulSilverHeartGold wrote:

Frosslass@Focus Sash
Snow cloak
EVs: 252 Spe / 252 SpAtk / 4 Def
Timid (+Spe -Atk)
~Ice Beam
~Spikes
~Destiny Bond
~Taunt

whatever it is in the wrong order big deal

No, it is not only that but this team shows that you are lazy, not being able to spell out Stealth Rock and saying S Rock instead is just annoying. Not to mention the fact that you don't explain any of your Pokémon's move sets, EVs, or even why you chose that Pokémon.

And, as SSHG said, please, please, please stick to the proper format... The way you have your team laid out right now is just horrible and hurts my eyes to read it.

And, I don't know why in the world your Choice Scarf Dugtrio (the worst item choice, too by the way) is Jolly... Seriously does 372 Speed need a +1 Speed Boost? Go with Adamant.

Yeah like Shnoogle said it show that you are lazy. Also it's hard to rate it when you have very little write ups and the wrong format.

I'm shocked you're using Scartrio over Scarftar. Scarftar is so commonly used on stall for a reason. I mean cursetar is cool and all but theres way too many fighting moves in OU for it to be a real huge threat (unless your opponent is awful). If you want a sweeper of that nature use something like curselax (who is way bulkier) or crocune.